The top space isn't needed in this picture. The emotion that he is givin off is sort of showing well.
Taking the picture right on in the front of him probably wasnt the greatest idea, takin it from the side view would have been better & they could have lowered the use of the empty space. Nice close view though. I rate this a 3.
The focus is off. Too much empty space surrounding her. Although you can tell she has some kind of emotion, a closer view of that would have been better.(cut the junk) I rate this a 2.